Overall, good fern. you have shown why you have done this research anyhow the photographers you have researched are relevant to your project... I think that there are certain aspects that you might wish to explore in more depth with regards to media and social theory and the representation as youth as trouble... Your historical research may need a few changes and i think in places a few illustrations regarding camera,s it is hard to give more specific feedback in the document as I can't annotate.. the referencing that you have posted is good...
Overall, good fern. you have shown why you have done this research anyhow the photographers you have researched are relevant to your project... I think that there are certain aspects that you might wish to explore in more depth with regards to media and social theory and the representation as youth as trouble... Your historical research may need a few changes and i think in places a few illustrations regarding camera,s it is hard to give more specific feedback in the document as I can't annotate.. the referencing that you have posted is good...
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